tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post8114193318541923080..comments2023-07-04T08:10:14.015-04:00Comments on Sonshine Thoughts: Flirty, Flirty - It's Another Blogfest!Rebecca T.http://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-31190036300660098872010-05-18T18:52:55.931-04:002010-05-18T18:52:55.931-04:00@Donna: aw... thanks *blushes* This is part of an ...@Donna: aw... thanks *blushes* This is part of an unfinished novel - with all of the super kind comments here I'm definitely getting psyched about working on it again. :DRebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-78098027984716808182010-05-18T01:29:14.012-04:002010-05-18T01:29:14.012-04:00Oh; that was so good. Shame to muddle this up wit...Oh; that was so good. Shame to muddle this up with such a lame sentiment; but, I was in love with the whole story. By the time I got to: “You make that dress look fantastic,” I couldn't dream of putting it down.<br /><br />Is this a scene from your novel? Or written just for this flirt fest?<br /><br />I didn't get around to reading too many of the entries, no excuse except laziness and wanting to get to bed early. <br /><br />Man, was I missing out. Thanks for stopping by, following, and giving me incentive to visit your fabulous blog.<br /><br />........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-62584798921516739352010-05-18T00:10:52.425-04:002010-05-18T00:10:52.425-04:00@Charity: I'm glad it didn't feel long. Th...@Charity: I'm glad it didn't feel long. That's such a great compliment!<br /><br />@Tessa: *sigh* this WIP is SO on hold right now, but I REALLY want to get back to it eventually.<br /><br />@Jemi: Thanks :D<br /><br />@Piedmont Writer: Thank you. Glad you liked it.<br /><br />@Mia: I loved that little bit too. He is cute. I like him.<br /><br />@Raquel: I thought that was an interesting twist on it. Thanks :)<br /><br />@Amalia: I love his sense of humor! Sometimes don't know where it comes from ;P<br /><br />@Courtney: Glad it flowed. I've been having such a hard time with this. Happy comments get me raring to go again.<br /><br />@Zoe: Thanks so much. Glad the dialogue worked!<br /><br />@Bryan: I will definitely go back and check on that. Thanks for the suggestion and the compliment :)<br /><br />@Tina: Oh, you should just see the next scene *winks*<br /><br />@elizabeth: Thanks for reciprocating the visit! I hope to finish it sometime. Something happened and I'm kinda angry about it 'cause I don't want to change what needs to be changed to make it better - but I'm slowly getting over it. Stupid characters taking over and doing whatever they want without my leave ;PRebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-43075593614349812952010-05-17T23:39:30.131-04:002010-05-17T23:39:30.131-04:00Rebecca!!!! Wow, this is soooo sweet! I love this:...Rebecca!!!! Wow, this is soooo sweet! I love this:<br />"A spray of rhinestones trailed..." Great imagery. This is an unfinished piece you say? Nooo kidding?<br />It sounds pretty good as it is, I feel. Are you planning to finish and submit it?<br /><br />Oh, thank you for reading my post on the flirt blogfest and following me! :DElizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-79475902708425835152010-05-17T23:04:09.860-04:002010-05-17T23:04:09.860-04:00Ooh! I *really* like this guy. Elana doesn't s...Ooh! I *really* like this guy. Elana doesn't stand a chance:)Tina Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05914428134837892539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-45550993346865012712010-05-16T20:47:51.781-04:002010-05-16T20:47:51.781-04:00Very good! Your scene moves along well. The one su...Very good! Your scene moves along well. The one suggestion I have is to go back and review how many tags you can drop (he said/she said, etc.) -- you've got strong dialog that that's clear who's speaking, so removing those unneeded tags will make it even snappier.<br /><br />Well done!Bryan Sabolhttp://timeguardiansaga.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-63938115524757005222010-05-16T19:39:37.750-04:002010-05-16T19:39:37.750-04:00And I do believe I was just your 100th follower! C...And I do believe I was just your 100th follower! Congrats!! "DZoe C. Courtmanhttp://zoecourtman.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-24029978767796627432010-05-16T19:38:20.227-04:002010-05-16T19:38:20.227-04:00Ah, this was fun, interesting and just flowed. I l...Ah, this was fun, interesting and just flowed. I liked the interaction with the daughter, the dialog that rang true. :D Nice job!!Zoe C. Courtmanhttp://zoecourtman.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-9567178374076615712010-05-16T17:03:04.209-04:002010-05-16T17:03:04.209-04:00also.. how was I not already following you??? Biza...also.. how was I not already following you??? Bizarre ;o)<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://princesscourtneysbarr.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Visit My Kingdom Anytime</a>Courtney Barr - The Southern Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14455508477182984039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-20065694216129778712010-05-16T17:01:40.578-04:002010-05-16T17:01:40.578-04:00This was fun! It flowed well and the ending was gr...This was fun! It flowed well and the ending was great!<br /><br />So sweet & not too long at all! ;o)<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://princesscourtneysbarr.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Visit My Kingdom Anytime</a>Courtney Barr - The Southern Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14455508477182984039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-82428482790367610762010-05-16T16:01:21.946-04:002010-05-16T16:01:21.946-04:00Ahahah! Okay, the part Mia mentioned was awesome a...Ahahah! Okay, the part Mia mentioned was awesome and also the end-- the reason to act like a twelve year old and embarrass his daughter! I love this guy. I would have kept reading, still, no problem!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-84189196512658932022010-05-16T15:59:54.937-04:002010-05-16T15:59:54.937-04:00I like the idea of a man with a daughter as a love...I like the idea of a man with a daughter as a love interest. He seems playful, sensitive, and funny. I liked your scene a lot.Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-48700362903226075902010-05-16T12:26:21.158-04:002010-05-16T12:26:21.158-04:00Dude it was the perfect! And I didn't feel the...Dude it was the perfect! And I didn't feel the length at all because I was so caught up in it!<br /><br />You also made me giggle *tips hat* well played. It was the <i>"“Well, I don’t really...” Elana started.<br /><br />“Is it against your religion?”<br /><br />“No.”<br /><br />“Are you paralyzed?”"</i> that did it. Anthony is so cute ;~)Mia Haysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01041441666482084762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-85216561917821769832010-05-16T09:40:17.608-04:002010-05-16T09:40:17.608-04:00What a sweet little story! It wasn't long, it...What a sweet little story! It wasn't long, it was not long enough. I want to know what happens.Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-26475552552050772782010-05-16T08:47:33.508-04:002010-05-16T08:47:33.508-04:00Great characters! Really makes me want to know mor...Great characters! Really makes me want to know more about what's going on :)Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-26722143716318422492010-05-16T08:37:16.219-04:002010-05-16T08:37:16.219-04:00What? Long? That was over faaaar too fast! I compl...What? Long? That was over faaaar too fast! I completely fell into your little story, and what a disappointment when I came to the "Thanks for reading!" line! <br /><br />I WANT MORE!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-22766952538206958112010-05-16T07:51:34.161-04:002010-05-16T07:51:34.161-04:00Yes, it was long, but it didn't feel long. I r...Yes, it was long, but it didn't <i>feel</i> long. I really enjoyed this. It was cute and light the way a good flirty scene should be, with enough tension to build on. Great job!Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.com