tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post6154299685027221410..comments2023-07-04T08:10:14.015-04:00Comments on Sonshine Thoughts: Attempting Astronomically Ample ActivitiesRebecca T.http://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-42787750802424854512010-04-03T15:29:36.473-04:002010-04-03T15:29:36.473-04:00Oooh, I like this. Subtle changes, but very diffe...Oooh, I like this. Subtle changes, but very different effect. Thanks for participating!Livia Blackburnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15805379309049803903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-88587155847510603662010-04-02T21:09:20.521-04:002010-04-02T21:09:20.521-04:00@Jen B.: thanks so much. It was challenging to pic...@Jen B.: thanks so much. It was challenging to pick a scene that could sorta kinda stand alone.<br /><br />@Poetry: Glad you enjoyed it :) Gotta go write "B" now.<br /><br />@maybe genius: YES! shivers! thanks for stopping by :)Rebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-83213830592818125172010-04-02T18:40:53.679-04:002010-04-02T18:40:53.679-04:00Hooboy, darker and creepier in the second version....Hooboy, darker and creepier in the second version. It gave me the shivers.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17034419617457525778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-79241580531382435452010-04-02T06:57:56.206-04:002010-04-02T06:57:56.206-04:00This was fantastic, and this is only day 1. lookin...This was fantastic, and this is only day 1. looking forward to more.<br />Good luck.<br />Yvonne.RHYTHM AND RHYMEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386975261804630799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-539570052153964302010-04-02T03:54:42.346-04:002010-04-02T03:54:42.346-04:00I think this is definitely how the challenge is su...I think this is definitely how the challenge is supposed to work: there is a lot more ominousness in the latter scene, which is impressive because even your original had a pretty strong sense of "Oh no..." Little things like changing the figure moving forward to the shadow moving forward are perfect. Nicely done!Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-46349224811168951182010-04-02T00:38:47.108-04:002010-04-02T00:38:47.108-04:00@Carolina: Yeah, I'm pretty nervous about the ...@Carolina: Yeah, I'm pretty nervous about the interview, but my Mom keeps saying to relax and just be myself *deep cleansing breaths*<br /><br />@Aching Hope: It takes one to know one!<br /><br />@Raquel: Thanks! Fun to see new faces :)<br /><br />@Joan: I have not seen it, but I think this is how I will greet everyone tomorrow.<br /><br />@Grammy: Thanks for stopping by. I enjoyed dropping in at your blog and I'll be back :)<br /><br />@Jemi: Unfortunately I have to get at least 6 hours of sleep or I get sick. Think of all the time I could add if that were not the case! le sigh.<br /><br />@Amalia: Glad you liked it. Yeah, my goal was to try to keep the basics and I was impressed how easy it was to give it such a sinister feel. Creepy. I don't know if I'll ever see Brandon the same way again!<br /><br />@Jenn: Oh grad school - it excites me so and then terrifies me in the next moment. I'll be an English major (obviously) but haven't thought much about a focus yet. My three candidates for a major project some day are: A. A. Milne, L. M. Montgomery and Lewis Carroll.Rebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-42755594261389088582010-04-01T22:09:03.484-04:002010-04-01T22:09:03.484-04:00Busy woman! I enjoyed the writing a lot! Well do...Busy woman! I enjoyed the writing a lot! Well done!<br /><br />I am really excited to start seeing posts about how your progress is going regarding the Master's program. I am actually pretty psyched:P<br /><br />Any idea what you'll focus on?<br /><br />Oh, and best of luck with the "to-do" list!JennMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05754816706901976659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-33534129201396204202010-04-01T21:12:51.935-04:002010-04-01T21:12:51.935-04:00These were great! I love how you kept the dialogue...These were great! I love how you kept the dialogue the same but still managed a totally different feel.Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-27529576498564023582010-04-01T20:31:25.801-04:002010-04-01T20:31:25.801-04:00I'm eliminating sleep pretty much all the time...I'm eliminating sleep pretty much all the time too. It's about the only way to cope with it all :)Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-65619979577687172072010-04-01T19:17:51.805-04:002010-04-01T19:17:51.805-04:00Dear Rebecca,
A really interesting posting! I look...Dear Rebecca,<br />A really interesting posting! I look forward to reading more. My best to you. Haven't read "The Stand" but have heard of it somewhere. I will look it up online. <br />Best regards to you.<br />RubyGrammyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07080499751409620799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-45347062753511082922010-04-01T16:57:37.329-04:002010-04-01T16:57:37.329-04:00I can't wait to read all the stuff you create ...I can't wait to read all the stuff you create this month! <br /><br /><br />VW: Herrow? <br /><br />Heheheheh, if you have seen Team America: World Police, you'll get this one.Joan Crawfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04513335615114222374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-9314617844887546632010-04-01T15:27:25.155-04:002010-04-01T15:27:25.155-04:00Interesting twist on the last line of your second ...Interesting twist on the last line of your second entry. Great how you went from wholesome to horror with a few tweaks. Great Job.Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-39439945618234999332010-04-01T14:15:20.730-04:002010-04-01T14:15:20.730-04:00have I lost my mind? Yes, yes I have I think you l...<i>have I lost my mind? Yes, yes I have</i> I think you lost your mind a long time ago ;)<br /><br />Just kiddin'<br /><br />Ooh.. I like that idea of writing a scene differently. Very itnersting.<br /><br />Ah! Have to go to class bye!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09222233412304660376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-24564332747327761322010-04-01T14:08:08.434-04:002010-04-01T14:08:08.434-04:00Oh my, so much going on for April. Good luck witr ...Oh my, so much going on for April. Good luck witr your grad school interview. Thankfully, all I had to do was write an essay and take the GREs. Easy peasy. I do not do well with interviews. My tongue swellsand my brain splatters inside my school, I think.<br /><br />Nice jow with the alternate version. The mood of it changed quite evidently.Carolina M. Valdez Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11589934533051907801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-53128016773305768702010-04-01T11:15:48.275-04:002010-04-01T11:15:48.275-04:00Falen: you are the reason it is on my to do list. ...Falen: you are the reason it is on my to do list. Otherwise I would NEVER attempt it this month. Well, that and all the Lost people.<br /><br />Now I must get off of here and get some other work done!Rebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881903861346737553.post-76521791298634627912010-04-01T11:01:45.131-04:002010-04-01T11:01:45.131-04:00OOOOOOH!!! I'm so excited for you to start The...OOOOOOH!!! I'm so excited for you to start The Stand!<br />*does a happy dance*<br />Did i tell you it's in my top 3 favorite books of all time? (i probably have...)Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.com